Mix short, punchy sentences for tension with longer, descriptive ones for flow. "Silence fell. Then, a bang."
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Don't start with "Once upon a time." Instead, drop the reader into the action or a vivid sensory moment. "The floorboards groaned as I took my first step." Mix short, punchy sentences for tension with longer,
"The fog was a thick, gray blanket, swallowing the trees whole." 2. Show, Don't Tell punchy sentences for tension with longer
"Her teeth chattered like a typewriter, and her breath emerged in small, ghostly puffs of frost." 3. Varied Sentence Structure
"'Run!' he screamed, but it was already too late."
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