Add a moment where the character talks to themselves or a pet to show their internal stress.

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Writing a Personal Narrative for Kids - Episode 4: Writing a Draft

"No, no, no," Leo whispered, tapping the trackpad frantically. The cursor was frozen. The clock on the wall ticked: 11:59 PM.

Desperation took over. He remembered his teacher’s advice: "When the software fails, check the hardware." He dove under the desk, tracing the tangled mess of wires. His hand brushed a warm power brick—it was loose. With a sharp breath, he shoved the plug firmly into the socket.