: Avoid overused phrases like "a weight settled on his chest". Instead, use lived details —specific sensory memories or unique character actions—that feel more authentic than generic descriptions.
: Some platforms like Draftin offer a "Hemingway Mode" that prevents you from deleting or backspacing. This forces you to focus strictly on moving the narrative forward rather than getting stuck in perfectionist editing loops.
To elevate a draft from generic to compelling, consider these tactics: