He shined his light on a small, modern-looking transmitter tucked into a broken brick of the wall.
Maya didn’t ask questions. She just replied: “Coming.”
On the walk home, Max and Maya didn't say much. The mystery of the scary tower was gone, replaced by something much better: a secret. "We aren't telling anyone about this, right?" Maya asked.
"Definitely not," Max said, looking back up at the silent tower. "It's better this way."
to be shorter (summary) or longer (adding more detail). Change the genre to Science Fiction or Fantasy.